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Angela Rose
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Character Info
Name: Angela Rose-Volkov
Age: Immortal Looks 20s
Alignment: CG
Race: Rosenite
Gender: Female
Class: Goddess/Herbalist/Advisor
Silver: 17895
So I don't push down our new announcement I'll post the results here:
Judges by Order:
Angela Rose
Silverstein
Naota
Aisling

How it was Graded:

Use of Color: Max 5
Creativity: Max 5
Intriguing(It kept us drawn in): Max 5
Shows Doesn’t Tell: Max 5
Gives a Clear Picture: Max 5
Max Points: 25

Nihr:
Use of Color: 4
Creativity: 4
Intriguing: 3
Shows Doesn’t Tell: 4
Gives a Clear Picture: 5
Points: 20

Nura:
Use of Color: 5
Creativity: 5
Intriguing: 4
Shows Doesn’t Tell: 5
Gives Clear Picture: 4
Points:  23

Nihr
Judging:
Use of Color: 3
Creativity: 4
Intriguing(It kept us drawn in): 5
Shows Doesn’t Tell: 4
Gives a Clear Picture: 5 
Points: 21

Nura
Judging:
Use of Color: 5
Creativity: 5
Intriguing(It kept us drawn in):5
Shows Doesn’t Tell: 5
Gives a Clear Picture: 5
Points: 25


Nihr:
Use of color - 4
Creativity - 3
Intriguing - 2 (though I loved the small twist ending)
Shows doesn't tell - 2 (a lot of explanation was done for the use of color, I'm sorry!)
Gives a clear picture - 3.5
Total for Nihr - 14.5 ( I'm sorry I'm sorry!!)

Nura:
Use of color - 2 (a lot at the beginning but it focused more on the dancing for the rest)
Creativity - 4
Intriguing - 4
Shows doesn't tell - 3 (the second I see someone explain an IC post with parentheses I am taken out of it immediately since they literally had to explain it)
Gives a clear picture - 3.5
Total: 16.5

Nihr:
Color: 4 for using black and white for the actual story telling and the red, orange and yellow to describe the emotion of the scene.
Creativity: 4
Intriguing: 5
Shows Doesn't Tell: 3 there was a lot more telling, since art would only be able to convey so much, without as much detail.
Gives a Clear Picture: 5
Points: 21

Nura: 
Color: 3 a little lacking in color description apart from describing the apparel of the woman in the painting. 
Creativity: 5 I was impressed with the idea of making it seem like the painting came alive, and how the story was not necessarily completely told on the canvas.
Intrigue: 3 I was not completely riveted however. 
Show doesn't Tell: 5 Lots of showing, little telling, which was the whole point. 
Gives a clear picture: 3, because the story might have come off a bit confusing if it had not been for the internal dialogue of the character, which defeats the purpose.
Total: 19

Totals
Nihr: 76.5
Nura: 83.5

I want to thank our judges for taking a long time (one of them took over an hour for each judging to give fair review). This was a hard write since I asked for you guys to basically paint a picture using words but without your character speaking. 

The Winner is Nura! I'll make sure to transfer the 1,000 silver to your account.
For Second Place I'll dish out 500 silver to Nihr!

You lot should have your Abedian bottle of Color.

The Judges will also get it.

If you guys have any questions for the judges go ahead and ask them ^^


OOC: Brittlez the lovable Head Admin and Server Mom
IC: Angela is The Weaver of Life and Love.
Angela's 3 God Rules
1. Angela can create a garden of protection and healing around her on command.
2. Angela has supreme control over her domains and can trump the efforts of all others.
3. Angela can bestow her blessing upon the earth, accelerating the growth and vitality of all life present.
Ramla

Character Info
Name: Sybille 'Ramla' Blaque
Age: 8000+
Alignment: TE
Race: Eldritch Prince
Gender: Female
Class: Countess/sorceress/alien?
Silver: 378

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